Thanks. I haven't studied poetry since high school so I was really rusty. I also had to edit out one of my favorite "Jason" lines because it didn't fit Etrigan's rhyming scheme. At one point he was suppposed to say, "Has anyone ever told you you sound like a bad translation of The Inferno?"
Do you think I should submit something with a little more action?
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Date: 2006-04-02 10:39 pm (UTC)I haven't studied poetry since high school so I was really rusty.
I also had to edit out one of my favorite "Jason" lines because it didn't fit Etrigan's rhyming scheme.
At one point he was suppposed to say, "Has anyone ever told you you sound like a bad translation of The Inferno?"
Do you think I should submit something with a little more action?